Poems with Mythic Allusions
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Charon's Cosmologyby Charles Simic |
Odysseusby W. S. Merwin |
Separationby W. S. Merwin |
Charon's Cosmology
by Charles Simic (1938- )
With only his feeble lantern
To tell him where he is
And every time a mountain
Of fresh corpses to load up
Take them to the other side
Where there are plenty more
I'd say by now he must be confused
As to which side is which
I'd say it doesn't matter
No one complains he's got
Their pockets to go through
In one a crust of bread in another a sausage
Once in a long while a mirror
Or a book which he throws
Overboard into the dark river
Swift cold and deep
Why do you think Charles Simic uses no punctuation? Does it have anything to do with the tone of the speaker towards the topic? In the third stanza, the speaker says, "No one complains." Who does he mean? Who are the possible complainers? Why do you think Charon throws the mirror or book overboard? What do they represent? What do they indicate about Charon? What do they indicate about the people who took them to the grave? Or about the people who buried the dead with these objects? Odysseus
W. S. Merwin ( 1927- )
For George KirsteinAlways the setting forth was the same,
Same sea, same dangers waiting for him
As though he had got nowhere but older.
Behind him on the receding shore
The identical reproaches, and somewhere
Out before him, the unraveling patience
He was wedded to. There were the islands
Each with its woman and twining welcome
To be navigated, and one to call "home."
The knowledge of all that he betrayed
Grew till it was the same whether he stayed
Or went. Therefore he went. And what wonder
If sometimes he could not remember
Which was the one who wished on his departure
Perils that he could never sail through,
And which, improbable, remote, and true,
Was the one he kept sailing home to?
Who was "the unravelling patience/He was wedded to"? Who were the women who were on each island? Who wished ill for Odysseus and who was "improbable, remote, and true"? What does it mean that Odysseus could not remember at times who wished him ill and who was loyal? Is this a fault with Odysseus or with the women or with life itself? This poem is not just about Odysseus. Who or what does Odysseus represent? What does he symbolize? Is Odysseus a positive or negative symbol or is the answer more complex than that? Separation
W. S. Merwin ( 1927- )
Your absence has gone through me
Like thread though a needle.
Everything I do is stitched with its color.
"Separation" is a poem that complements "Odysseus" though that may not have been intentional on the poet's part. In what way can this poem be considered a complement to W. S. Merwin's first poem?